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wizered153
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 |  Subject: Gregory Vulcor Sat Sep 29, 2012 1:26 pm | |
| Biography: - Spoiler:
Gregory Vulcor, born in Vale, the only son of Roland and Carolin Vulcor. They lived a hard life, Vulcor taking up bounties for easy money and Caroline as a Barmaid, but they made due. When he was only 8, Roland left the family, planning on looking for better opportunities elsewhere. Without Roland to help with the money, Gregory had to start helping Carolin, who was now working as a waitress at a resturaunt, when he turned 12.
At 18, Gregory wished to join the Vale Army, hoping it would make more money for the household. While his mother protested at first, she eventually supported him. After completing training, Gregory stayed in Vale for another few years before being sent to Surna under the command of Colonel Chirstopher Warston in the 421st Infantry Brigade. When he got there, he learned that his father had been living there but was having some financial issues himself, and that he was executed. He has positioned there for some time, and when he returned home with the other 11 remaining soldiers in Christopher's team that was in Surna. He was reunited with his mother, but only for a few days before they had to return to Surna. He is now in Surna. In the recent days, Gregory began having nightmares of the recent events of Sarkun, and him standing under the flag of the Empire with the rest of his brigade. When Christopher soon sent message that anyone willing to join his new mission under the flag of Sarkun, Gregory along with a few other soldiers from his position in Surna refused, while the rest went onward to Vale. Gregory is now without a Brigade and anyone to command him.
___________________________________________________________________________________________________ Age: 24 Race: Human Gender: Male Abilities: Knowledge of Aiming and firing a Matchlock rifle Knowledge of a Sword Alignment: Good Deity: Tyr Birthplace: Vale Occupation: Vale Soldier Equipment:- Spoiler:
Iron Sabre
Matchlock Rifle
Vale Army Private Uniform
Other Misc. Items: 104 Shillings White Cloth Shirt Blue Cloth Pants
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BooM
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| | Subject: Re: Gregory Vulcor Mon Oct 01, 2012 3:18 am | |
| sure, continue the mans dynasty | |
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noodle
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| | Subject: Re: Gregory Vulcor Mon Oct 01, 2012 5:43 am | |
| I would love to see you learn some formatting, wiz. Honestly, formatting makes a great first impression on your app. First impressions are important. Anyways, that bio was pretty painful to read, mostly because of the following issues I have with it. 1) - wizered153 wrote:
- "...but was kept a seceret from the public."
Why? Was there a good reason? If so could you put it on there? 2) - wizered153 wrote:
- "When word reached them of his fathers death..."
If he was a secret child, and Roland left him and his mother, how would anybody know them? Why would anyone in the Vale care? 3) - wizered153 wrote:
- "...and make a life there, where his father lived once."
Why would he care about his father if he left him at a young age? Pending leaning towards DeniedPatch up the holes in his story and I might accept | |
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Munroe
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| | Subject: Re: Gregory Vulcor Mon Oct 01, 2012 6:06 am | |
| - noodle wrote:
- 3)
- wizered153 wrote:
- "...and make a life there, where his father lived once."
Why would he care about his father if he left him at a young age? Why wouldn't he? Anyways, I'd agree with the rest of Noodle's post. Well, except maybe formatting. Formatting isn't important. Just fix up the bio some. | |
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wizered153
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| | Subject: Re: Gregory Vulcor Mon Oct 01, 2012 6:26 am | |
| The reason I don't make a super complicated fromat that describes every single item with three sentences, is because I like to keep things convient, I don't like going through a huge page, and only about one third is the bio and character description, and the rest is about the items. | |
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noodle
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| | Subject: Re: Gregory Vulcor Mon Oct 01, 2012 9:51 am | |
| - Munroe wrote:
- noodle wrote:
- 3)
- wizered153 wrote:
- "...and make a life there, where his father lived once."
Why would he care about his father if he left him at a young age?
Why wouldn't he?
Anyways, I'd agree with the rest of Noodle's post. Well, except maybe formatting. Formatting isn't important. Just fix up the bio some. Well, if I had known my dad had walked out on me to go kill things in a foreign country, I wouldn't really care if he died or not. Another question related to that point, Why cant he make a name for himself in Vale? | |
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wizered153
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| | Subject: Re: Gregory Vulcor Fri Oct 05, 2012 11:33 am | |
| Bump Comment, and Noodle I sorta fixed some of the problems, and one slight edit makes a reason why he would care. Roland left behind his best sword so his son would soon recieve it. | |
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wizered153
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| | Subject: Re: Gregory Vulcor Sun Oct 14, 2012 2:47 am | |
|  Why has no one responded in weeks? | |
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Dominator046
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| | Subject: Re: Gregory Vulcor Sun Oct 14, 2012 10:05 am | |
| Nick-Nack Paddy-Wack, give a dog a bone, this Vulcor is rolling home. | |
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wizered153
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| | Subject: Re: Gregory Vulcor Sun Oct 21, 2012 11:14 am | |
|  How many more accepts before this can be moved out of approval? | |
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Venom OPS
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| | Subject: Re: Gregory Vulcor Sun Oct 21, 2012 11:21 am | |
| 2/3 Community
0/1 Moderator
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Dominator046
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| | Subject: Re: Gregory Vulcor Mon Oct 22, 2012 4:17 am | |
| - Venom OPS wrote:
- 2/3 Community
0/1 Moderator
BooM accepted, I believe his word would count as a moderator vote. So, it would be 1/3 community, and 1/1 moderator, in that case. | |
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BooM
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| | Subject: Re: Gregory Vulcor Mon Oct 22, 2012 4:20 am | |
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Venom OPS
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| | Subject: Re: Gregory Vulcor Mon Oct 22, 2012 6:40 am | |
| - BooM wrote:
- I'm no moderator.
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BooM
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| | Subject: Re: Gregory Vulcor Mon Oct 22, 2012 7:47 am | |
| - Venom OPS wrote:
- BooM wrote:
- I'm no moderator.
obviously better than venom though | |
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PhoenixRhapsody
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| | Subject: Re: Gregory Vulcor Mon Oct 22, 2012 9:35 am | |
| - BooM wrote:
- Venom OPS wrote:
- BooM wrote:
- I'm no moderator.
obviously better than venom though Not really. | |
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Dominator046
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| | Subject: Re: Gregory Vulcor Mon Oct 22, 2012 10:07 am | |
| - PhoenixRhapsody wrote:
- BooM wrote:
- Venom OPS wrote:
- BooM wrote:
- I'm no moderator.
obviously better than venom though
Not really. My apologies. | |
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wizered153
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| | Subject: Re: Gregory Vulcor Wed Oct 31, 2012 10:10 am | |
| HEY IS ANYONE STILL OUT THERE? | |
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Dominator046
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| | Subject: Re: Gregory Vulcor Sat Nov 03, 2012 5:41 pm | |
| For the record, I've seen Munroe on multiple occasions express that the whole 1 Mod - 3 Com rule was merely a pleasant way to gauge whether something should definitely be accepted or not; he said it was not adamantly necessary for approval. Now, while I'm not saying that give anyone who can the right to just willy-nilly rocket things through approval; I am saying that Munroe himself has expressed there being some flexibility in the approval process.
This character does not possess too much power, he isn't as experienced, is mostly a passive character, and seems to have a general drive to add to the roleplay on the server. I'm saying that it might be worth taking a second look at, maybe taking a look and seeing if the amount of approval available from the community is well enough to have this character in game, or if it perhaps requires something more adamant.
Having said this... I would say a couple more community votes would, or maybe a moderator vote alone, would give me enough motivation to pass this character through approval, were I able to do so. That is not my place however, I merely offer my own stance on the situation.
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wizered153
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| | Subject: Re: Gregory Vulcor Tue Nov 13, 2012 2:22 pm | |
| Updates some things, and if you think he shouldn't be part of the vale army, please don't complain here, complain at my Vale Army Page by clicking on the link below. Got Complaints?-------------> https://aeriaroleplay.rpg-board.net/t766-the-vale-army <----------------Got Complaints? Also Bump Comment | |
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Cakebread
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| | Subject: Re: Gregory Vulcor Mon Nov 19, 2012 1:40 pm | |
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Black Banana Party
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| | Subject: Re: Gregory Vulcor Tue Dec 11, 2012 8:12 am | |
| I love how the 'no's are longer than his application. | |
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wizered153
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| | Subject: Re: Gregory Vulcor Thu Jan 31, 2013 11:41 am | |
| Bumpity bump comment
Also this has been stuck in approval for 4 months | |
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Spadge
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| | Subject: Re: Gregory Vulcor Thu Jan 31, 2013 12:39 pm | |
| - wizered153 wrote:
- Bumpity bump comment
Also this has been stuck in approval for 4 months Unfortunate that it has, but seeing as there's been no server and no real RP in several months it's not surprising. Thankfully that will be fixed in (hopefully) the next several days. As for your character, I'm fine accepting him. | |
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Rutabega
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| | Subject: Re: Gregory Vulcor Fri Feb 08, 2013 12:32 am | |
| I'll move this along into the land of accepted characters and milkshakes.
ON ONE CONDITION.
If wheel-locks are standard issue to an entire army I demand you hand over whatever goose is squeezing out golden eggs, because short of a whole henhouse of those bastards working around the clock there's no way an entire army could be funded with wheel-locks. | |
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