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noodle Monthly Bather
Posts : 334 Join date : 2012-06-09 Location : Surna, Sanctimonia
| Subject: Austin Once-Possessed Melrose Sat Jun 09, 2012 11:50 am | |
| Name: Austin Once-Possessed Age: 24 Race: Human Place of Birth: The Wastes Occupation: Inscriber Favoured Deity: Akash Bio: During his childhood in The Wastes, Austin grew up the bastard child of a brutal father. He grew up with little muscle, yet a large mind. His father had him shunned by his community and put him on a ship to Sanctimonia, the Captain adopted the young orphan and gifted him with a silver-laced Buffcoat. (Due to the boy's affinity for magic), At a brief stop in Infernia, Austin became possessed at the age of 17. On his arrival to Sanctimonia the demon took temporary control of his voice, however Volten Ogoni performed a exorcism on Austin and lifted the curse of the demon, banishing it to Hell. Active Effects/SkillsAbilitiesProficienciesMagicBeing abused by his father, Austin excelled in his studies as an attempt to please his father. He has looked into Inscription Magic and is able to create Low-Med Level scrolls, enchantments, and wards. As well as basic elemental magic. OVERALL LEVEL: HighRangedHis high intellect allows him to learn the reloading mechanism of firearms with ease, rifles and muskets are mighty heavy and can not be lifted, the only ability Austin would have in ranged would be with the handheld pistol. He also lacks the physical ability to draw a bow or a crossbow. OVERALL LEVEL: LowMeleeAustin lacks the physical ability to wield anything larger than a dagger. For which he has no training. OVERALL LEVEL: NoneUnarmedAustin can not fist-fight for... obvious reasons. OVERALL LEVEL: NoneGearSilver-Laced Cowhide Buffcoat Gold-Flake Inkwell Coinpurse: 500 Shillings Relationships Kara Ogoni:Kara was one of the first people I've met since I've arrived in Surna... She's been so nice... I... I think.... no... I couldn't be in... not with her... but why not? She's a nice girl... Why not? Because. She's not interested, so I left Surna, there were no more possibilities here. Volten Ogoni:I thank Mr. Ogoni so much for ridding me of my demon, however I am now certain I will never repay the debt I owe unto him.... Brenna Arrakis:Brenna seems like a nice woman, shes a bit temperamental. I saved her life on that shade hunting expedition... after I poisoned her with super strong booze... Duncan Atterson:Duncan's a nice guy with his heart set on Brenna. Its nice to see love defying convention. We fought together in that shade hunting trip, afterwards we had a nice chat... I think we're becoming good friends. Aurora MelroseMy loving wife, Aurora. I took her name as I forsake my own. Looking back on my journal, I was rather naive.
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Munroe Tryhard
Posts : 602 Join date : 2012-02-06
| Subject: Re: Austin Once-Possessed Melrose Sat Jun 09, 2012 1:21 pm | |
| I will accept this, though there are some minor flaws in the biography.
1. You can only be born as a Tiefling. You can not become one by being possessed, regardless of age.
2. The Nine Hells are now referred to as just "Hell", to avoid copying Forgotten Realms. This hasn't actually been written anywhere on the forums, so it's easily forgivable.
One last caveat: I know he's supposed to be smart, but a kid with extensive knowledge of wards and enchantments really stretches the realm of plausibility. Be careful not to overplay his abilities. | |
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noodle Monthly Bather
Posts : 334 Join date : 2012-06-09 Location : Surna, Sanctimonia
| Subject: Re: Austin Once-Possessed Melrose Sat Jun 09, 2012 3:20 pm | |
| - Munroe wrote:
- I will accept this, though there are some minor flaws in the biography.
1. You can only be born as a Tiefling. You can not become one by being possessed, regardless of age.
2. The Nine Hells are now referred to as just "Hell", to avoid copying Forgotten Realms. This hasn't actually been written anywhere on the forums, so it's easily forgivable.
One last caveat: I know he's supposed to be smart, but a kid with extensive knowledge of wards and enchantments really stretches the realm of plausibility. Be careful not to overplay his abilities. I have fixed the issue of Nine Hells, and excluded the Tiefling tidbit. Thanks. | |
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Cakebread Vengaboy
Posts : 198 Join date : 2012-02-04
| Subject: Re: Austin Once-Possessed Melrose Sat Jun 09, 2012 3:44 pm | |
| Acceptemente, kosher and basic. | |
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BooM Archmage
Posts : 629 Join date : 2012-02-22 Age : 29 Location : Paradise City, Florida
| Subject: Re: Austin Once-Possessed Melrose Sun Jun 10, 2012 8:30 am | |
| Deny, but will go to pending if the details below are changed. - Quote :
- Stage 3: Possessed
The result of a successful possession attempt. A Demon's soul has moved into the individual's body, seizing control of most, if not all, motor functions. The mind and soul are likely damaged irreparably. All Stage 3 individuals are to be tracked and contained within the Asylum, no exceptions. It is permissible to kill a Stage 3 under orders from a superior. Be sure to burn the body. just throwing that out there from munroes post on demonology and such. The age. I mean cmon. A fourteen year old? We have like so many youngins so far and with your magic skill and range skills it would be near impossible to master them by that age. It doesn't hurt to make him 30 or something. EDIT: Accepted based on Mun says it checks out. Roleplayed with him lately and thought it was fine.
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noodle Monthly Bather
Posts : 334 Join date : 2012-06-09 Location : Surna, Sanctimonia
| Subject: Re: Austin Once-Possessed Melrose Sun Jun 10, 2012 11:53 am | |
| - BooM wrote:
- Deny, but will go to pending if the details below are changed.
- Quote :
- Stage 3: Possessed
The result of a successful possession attempt. A Demon's soul has moved into the individual's body, seizing control of most, if not all, motor functions. The mind and soul are likely damaged irreparably. All Stage 3 individuals are to be tracked and contained within the Asylum, no exceptions. It is permissible to kill a Stage 3 under orders from a superior. Be sure to burn the body. just throwing that out there from munroes post on demonology and such.
The age. I mean cmon. A fourteen year old? We have like so many youngins so far and with your magic skill and range skills it would be near impossible to master them by that age. It doesn't hurt to make him 30 or something. Changed! Plus an effect for the demonology tidbit | |
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Rutabega Administrator
Posts : 201 Join date : 2012-02-20
| Subject: Re: Austin Once-Possessed Melrose Sun Jun 10, 2012 3:02 pm | |
| I see someone like the Markka style of char page.
I will accept though. I look forward to seeing you inserver once I get some time off of bloody work. | |
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Munroe Tryhard
Posts : 602 Join date : 2012-02-06
| Subject: Re: Austin Once-Possessed Melrose Sun Jun 10, 2012 4:38 pm | |
| - BooM wrote:
- Stuff
We have one 14-year-old so far. There are also a couple 16-year-olds, but the people who play them no longer come here (and will likely be banned the next time they do). Also, I accepted this, and I wrote the lore on Demonology. It checks out, don't worry. I do like the addition of "Marked" to the page. It makes things clearer, so that's good. | |
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noodle Monthly Bather
Posts : 334 Join date : 2012-06-09 Location : Surna, Sanctimonia
| Subject: Re: Austin Once-Possessed Melrose Mon Jun 11, 2012 3:28 pm | |
| - TotallyNotZaku wrote:
- Hello Richard Crimson.
Who? | |
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Munroe Tryhard
Posts : 602 Join date : 2012-02-06
| Subject: Re: Austin Once-Possessed Melrose Mon Jun 11, 2012 5:17 pm | |
| - noodle wrote:
Nope. Not at 14. | |
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