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Vengaboy
Posts : 157
Join date : 2012-02-09
 |  Subject: O, Sweet Memory - Commentary Tue Apr 03, 2012 8:17 am | |
| Nice story. The style is very believable and the character's emotions seem genuine. It's a great story so far and I'm surprised there wasn't a commentary thread for this already. Needless to say, I'm excited to see more. | |
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Pat
Administrator
Posts : 458
Join date : 2012-02-04
| | Subject: Re: O, Sweet Memory - Commentary Sat Apr 14, 2012 7:25 am | |
| I agree. You should continue this. | |
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