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| Victor 'Visor' Snowe [WIP] | |
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Pac Man Scrublet
Posts : 14 Join date : 2013-03-31 Age : 30 Location : Tennessee
| Subject: Victor 'Visor' Snowe [WIP] Tue Apr 02, 2013 3:21 pm | |
| Character Biography A look at Victor in his full attire. - Spoiler:
Victor not sporting a helm. - Spoiler:
Name : Victor Snowe Alias : Visor Race : Human Height : 6'5" Sex : Male Age : Early Thirties Nationality : Considers himself Sanctimonian Birthplace : Vale / Bordering village Previous Occupation(s) : Vale Army, Village Guard Current Occupation(s) : Hired caravan guard, Sell-sword Known Languages : Common and basic Occitanian Physique and Demeanor Victor, although already rather old for a man of his occupation, gives an impression of seniority that, for a moment, shows a level of wisdom seeming beyond his years. It is later on however, though not much later, that he shows himself with a sense of entitlement, greed, and sinful pride to those around him. These traits however are hidden under a deep, raspy voiced, hulking human figure covered in a platemail, chainmail, and leather combination that gives the impression it was once a suit of knight's armor, and has been torn down and rebuilt with a more rugged design. His facial features, although generally covered by his full helm, which he had been given the nickname of 'Visor' therefore of, are that of a common soldier; unkempt with a fair sized goatee, obviously trimmed with a knife. Although his personality and appearance may say otherwise, Victor is far from a standard 'lemming', as he himself would put it, and hides a rather keen mind behind his exterior. Though Victor is of slightly above intelligence, most of his thought process is put into combat situations he finds himself in, and how to properly escape the situation intact and with his opponent in a pool of blood. Combat Strategy & Techniques : Combat Fundamentals : Due to his training as a soldier and work as a hired guard and sell-sword over the years, Victor is a competent fighter whom isn't afraid to steel himself if the need arises. Although only learning basic sword-play in training during his soldiering days, Victor has, through his numerous battles and many former sell-sword hirelings, learned proper and extremely deadly sword-play with all types of small and medium sized blades and blunt weapons, including daggers, bastard swords, and maces. Although he can wield all of these types of weapons properly, his training and preference have leaned himself towards use of a shield, and as a result rarely goes into battle willingly without one at his disposal. Primary specialization(s) : General : Medium sized blades and blunt weapons, Single Weapon : Bastard Sword, Single Weapon : Flanged Mace Secondary specializations(s) : General : Small sized blades and blunt weapons, Singe weapon : Broad Dagger, Single Weapon : Holy water club / mace Primary armor specialization(s) : General : Medium to heavy armor : Platemail, scalemail, and chainmail. Secondary armor specialization(s) : General : Leather and other light armor types, usually mismatched with his current set of equipment. Biography - Spoiler:
WIP, will be completed within a few days time. I have the main points down, all that need be done now is to find the time to write it. Possibly in computer class? Most likely.
Short Biography - Spoiler:
Simply a brief, bulletin-like list of the main events that led Victor to this point.
- Grew up a simple peasant boy with his mother and father. -Enlisted into the Vale military at the age of eightteen. -Left after given the opportunity to do so. -Asked by a military acquaintance to accompany him on a paid job to guard a caravan for a two week journey. -After being paid, realized the opportunities to make a good profit off of being a hired guard. -Only took jobs as a hired guard for the next three years, living rather above his means with his earnings in his off time. -Eventually his earnings as a simple caravan and merchant hireling stopped satisfying his tastes. -Victor accepts his first job as a sellsword of the highest bidder. -Now satisfied with the money being made by simply being a sellsword, Victor had no issues continuing down this path. -Victor falls farther into the webs of greed, eventually reaching a point where he simply feels entitled to a 'good' life. -Continues his life as a sellsword, now with very few limitations on what job he will accept for a hefty pouch of money. -Now, a man in his thirties, Victor eventually makes his way into Surna for the first time in several years, eager to find someone willing to give him a full pouch for whatever deed they need done that can be handled with a weapon.
Inventory Steel Bastard Sword- Spoiler:
Steel Broad Dagger- Spoiler:
Mismatched Platemail, Chainmail, and leather attire.- Spoiler:
Kiteshield- Spoiler:
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| | | noodle Monthly Bather
Posts : 334 Join date : 2012-06-09 Location : Surna, Sanctimonia
| Subject: Re: Victor 'Visor' Snowe [WIP] Tue Apr 02, 2013 3:50 pm | |
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| | | Pac Man Scrublet
Posts : 14 Join date : 2013-03-31 Age : 30 Location : Tennessee
| Subject: Re: Victor 'Visor' Snowe [WIP] Tue Apr 02, 2013 3:53 pm | |
| - noodle wrote:
- Lame. Lol, but accepted
Well, lame to you also Sir, but I thank thee for said accept. | |
| | | noodle Monthly Bather
Posts : 334 Join date : 2012-06-09 Location : Surna, Sanctimonia
| Subject: Re: Victor 'Visor' Snowe [WIP] Tue Apr 02, 2013 3:53 pm | |
| - Pac Man wrote:
- noodle wrote:
- Lame. Lol, but accepted
Well, lame to you also Sir, but I thank thee for said accept. Are you stupid I didn't accept. | |
| | | Pac Man Scrublet
Posts : 14 Join date : 2013-03-31 Age : 30 Location : Tennessee
| Subject: Re: Victor 'Visor' Snowe [WIP] Tue Apr 02, 2013 4:00 pm | |
| - noodle wrote:
- Pac Man wrote:
- noodle wrote:
- Lame. Lol, but accepted
Well, lame to you also Sir, but I thank thee for said accept. Are you stupid I didn't accept. Scandalous lies, Noodle. | |
| | | noodle Monthly Bather
Posts : 334 Join date : 2012-06-09 Location : Surna, Sanctimonia
| Subject: Re: Victor 'Visor' Snowe [WIP] Tue Apr 02, 2013 4:18 pm | |
| - Pac Man wrote:
- noodle wrote:
- Pac Man wrote:
- noodle wrote:
- Lame.
Well, lame to you also Sir, but I thank thee for said accept. Are you stupid I didn't accept. Scandalous lies, Noodle. What lies? | |
| | | Pac Man Scrublet
Posts : 14 Join date : 2013-03-31 Age : 30 Location : Tennessee
| | | | Dominator046 Senior Wizard
Posts : 458 Join date : 2012-08-09 Age : 29 Location : 'Murica.
| Subject: Re: Victor 'Visor' Snowe [WIP] Wed Apr 03, 2013 6:16 am | |
| I'd certainly be willing to see this character in RP, as I trust Pac Man well enough, and think this would be a good addition to the server. I just want to see how he roleplays first, before giving my final verdict.
However, I'd like to mention that Thirty is not young, most men in this age would be dead by their late forties, or nearing their deaths. Going from Late Twenties to Late Thirties (Early forties at most) are your peak years, and nearer almost towards your later years. I'd like to say it's more a less your mid-life area, but sadly, that is only for the fortunate. If you were a Benjamin Franklin mo-fo, and lived to be seventy-two, you were thought to have God at your back.
Similarly, while I fully understand your interpretation of Bastard Sword usage, as I've looked at a good bit of melee combat being put into practice, but I think I'd like to hear a bit more in particular about his usage of a bastard sword. That's just me though, and I'm a wordy bastard.
And heeeeeey, I think I've seen this format before. XP JK, you used it well, and it was funny that you left out one of the parts I- wait, nevermind, it wasn't you that I told about the Forbidden Weaponry section. I don't know why, but I always love doing it. XD
anyways, I think it looks good, you are a bit new to the community, but there are room for some combat oriented characters; I just want to see how you handle the ones you have, before I give you the full blown seal of approval. | |
| | | Black Banana Party Giant Scrub
Posts : 63 Join date : 2012-08-31
| Subject: Re: Victor 'Visor' Snowe [WIP] Wed Apr 03, 2013 6:30 am | |
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| | | BooM Archmage
Posts : 629 Join date : 2012-02-22 Age : 29 Location : Paradise City, Florida
| Subject: Re: Victor 'Visor' Snowe [WIP] Wed Apr 10, 2013 4:46 am | |
| I really enjoyed the RP that came from Pac Man with this character as a sellsword desiring money. RPing him more ruthlessly as I saw really set him apart from the other mercenaries wanting to capitalize on Surna's problems. I will toss this an accept once you finish your biography. But the Vale Army? C'mon... they're nothing.. | |
| | | Atlas Vengaboy
Posts : 166 Join date : 2012-08-27 Age : 29
| Subject: Re: Victor 'Visor' Snowe [WIP] Wed Apr 10, 2013 5:28 am | |
| Pfft Vale army. I think their leader has died like 20 times at least, and every single time, his soldiers just die as fast.
+1 from me, love how much of a prick your guy is | |
| | | Dominator046 Senior Wizard
Posts : 458 Join date : 2012-08-09 Age : 29 Location : 'Murica.
| Subject: Re: Victor 'Visor' Snowe [WIP] Wed Apr 10, 2013 5:58 am | |
| I've seen this character roleplay, and heard of his exploits similarly. Welcome aboard, as far as I'm concerned. = ) | |
| | | noodle Monthly Bather
Posts : 334 Join date : 2012-06-09 Location : Surna, Sanctimonia
| Subject: Re: Victor 'Visor' Snowe [WIP] Wed Apr 10, 2013 11:29 am | |
| - Black Banana Party wrote:
- no
Jk, accepted does not compute | |
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