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PostSubject: Halaster 'Rose-Thorn' Keldorn   Halaster 'Rose-Thorn' Keldorn EmptyWed Aug 29, 2012 7:54 pm

Halaster 'Rose-Thorn' Keldorn 4Ovp7

"They called me Rose-Thorn, Thorned Rose, Thorn dick, Rose sower, BroBriar the thorn patch. Should have called me Survivor because I've got lots paperwork to do, these flowers don't send them selves to their funerals by them self!"

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Age:32
Gender:Male
Race:Human
Birthplace:The small town Richshire in Southern sanctimonia


Stats:
Melee, devoted to mainly Swords and Board, he can work with polearms.
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Firearms, Some practice with them.
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Magic, has no practice in it at all.
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Current equipment
Half plate fitted to work with leather armour
Long sword
Medium sized Iron shield
200 shilings
Hedge cutters
Small trimming plier
Some seeds of common plants





Biography:
Spoiler:

TLDR:

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Alignment:Neutral Good

Favored Enemy:Bandits
Favored Weapon:Balanced light Long Swords
Deity:Tyr-God of Justice

Current Tasks:
Defend Surna from Dark enemies if there are any.
Maybe open a florist shop? Get some beer? Fishing?
Remove this curse, maybe get some merc friends or something, beer is a good pass time with friends.
Maybe some work?


Completed Tasks:


Failed Tasks:.
Own a florist shop for 20 years!
Eternal Tasks:



Activity log:


Last edited by Cakebread on Thu Aug 30, 2012 1:45 pm; edited 6 times in total
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PostSubject: Re: Halaster 'Rose-Thorn' Keldorn   Halaster 'Rose-Thorn' Keldorn EmptyThu Aug 30, 2012 4:39 am

101/0 original character
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PostSubject: Re: Halaster 'Rose-Thorn' Keldorn   Halaster 'Rose-Thorn' Keldorn EmptyThu Aug 30, 2012 5:24 am

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PostSubject: Re: Halaster 'Rose-Thorn' Keldorn   Halaster 'Rose-Thorn' Keldorn EmptyThu Aug 30, 2012 8:13 am

To be edited pending changes made to the character.


Last edited by Dominator046 on Thu Aug 30, 2012 11:20 am; edited 1 time in total
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PostSubject: Re: Halaster 'Rose-Thorn' Keldorn   Halaster 'Rose-Thorn' Keldorn EmptyThu Aug 30, 2012 9:50 am

The picture doesn't fit, and the bio... well, it needs work.
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PostSubject: Re: Halaster 'Rose-Thorn' Keldorn   Halaster 'Rose-Thorn' Keldorn EmptyThu Aug 30, 2012 11:03 am

Munroe wrote:
The picture doesn't fit, and the bio... well, it needs work.

I had a dream today of you guys posting this kind of stuff on my app
"Neutral good? Shouldn't he be something else?"

And also the bio, I wrote this at 3am,
I didn't even had Keldorn Firecam on my mind.
I got Keldorn thinking of Dorn's ring from Lig of lepuns.

I knew the bio sucked so, just pm me in sf the shit that needs work so you

DON'T SHIT POST LIKE BLITZ AND ZAKU.



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PostSubject: Re: Halaster 'Rose-Thorn' Keldorn   Halaster 'Rose-Thorn' Keldorn EmptyThu Aug 30, 2012 11:16 am

<shit like blitz and zaku>

no but really can I get a summary. I hate reading long bio's.

All I want is the important stuff, everyone else can get the less important facts.
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PostSubject: Re: Halaster 'Rose-Thorn' Keldorn   Halaster 'Rose-Thorn' Keldorn EmptyThu Aug 30, 2012 11:49 am

Excuse me, I was not shit posting. I was just posting Keldorn because he shares the same name as your character. I had hoped you were refreshing him and I'd get brownie points for pointing it out but apparently I'm just a shit poster. :'(

Sometimes when I get lonely I pretend O'neil is my real father.
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PostSubject: Re: Halaster 'Rose-Thorn' Keldorn   Halaster 'Rose-Thorn' Keldorn EmptyThu Aug 30, 2012 11:57 am

and then, O'neil looks at you stoically and says something witty, and you wish he really was your father.
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PostSubject: Re: Halaster 'Rose-Thorn' Keldorn   Halaster 'Rose-Thorn' Keldorn EmptyThu Aug 30, 2012 1:07 pm

I am working with Cakebread to make the bio acceptable. So far I have redone 5 paragraphs. The rest will be for another time.

I will also redo his TL;DR in a nice format. But that too will be another time.
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PostSubject: Re: Halaster 'Rose-Thorn' Keldorn   Halaster 'Rose-Thorn' Keldorn EmptyThu Aug 30, 2012 1:27 pm

Well, I thought the bio explained what it needed to.
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PostSubject: Re: Halaster 'Rose-Thorn' Keldorn   Halaster 'Rose-Thorn' Keldorn EmptyThu Aug 30, 2012 2:40 pm

Krug wrote:
Well, I thought the bio explained what it needed to.

It does, but better grammar is always better. Redundancy FTW.
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PostSubject: Re: Halaster 'Rose-Thorn' Keldorn   Halaster 'Rose-Thorn' Keldorn EmptyThu Aug 30, 2012 3:11 pm

Well let's not be massive douchebags just because it's not in flowing, perfect english. It doesn't matter.

Also Genesis, YES get in there my son.
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PostSubject: Re: Halaster 'Rose-Thorn' Keldorn   Halaster 'Rose-Thorn' Keldorn EmptyThu Aug 30, 2012 4:07 pm

his power doesn't seem too bad, and the TL;DR was decent. So I'll give this an accept.
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PostSubject: Re: Halaster 'Rose-Thorn' Keldorn   Halaster 'Rose-Thorn' Keldorn EmptyFri Aug 31, 2012 7:25 am

Quote :
"They called me Rose-Thorn, Thorned Rose, Thorn dick, Rose sower, BroBriar"

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PostSubject: Re: Halaster 'Rose-Thorn' Keldorn   Halaster 'Rose-Thorn' Keldorn EmptyTue Sep 11, 2012 2:28 pm



Grace Period BUMP
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PostSubject: Re: Halaster 'Rose-Thorn' Keldorn   Halaster 'Rose-Thorn' Keldorn EmptyTue Sep 11, 2012 3:44 pm

Blitz wrote:
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"They called me Rose-Thorn, Thorned Rose, Thorn dick, Rose sower, BroBriar"

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The nicknames are poorly thought-out.

But I've spoken with Cakebread about this character and it checks out, so I'll toss this an accept.
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PostSubject: Re: Halaster 'Rose-Thorn' Keldorn   Halaster 'Rose-Thorn' Keldorn EmptyTue Sep 11, 2012 4:05 pm

o7 Colonel Jack O'Neill.

If Munroe thinks it's okay, it must be.
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