Subject: Jurgen Cobbald - Knight of 1 Sun Feb 26, 2012 4:08 pm
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Without the Mask Jurgen Cobbald - Knight of 1 Themesong: Preußens Gloria - Johann Gottfried Piefke
General Information
General Information wrote:
Age: 36 Gender: Male Race: Human Birthplace: Occitan regions. Occupation: Mercenary Personality: Jurgen used to be a righteous man throughout his life, trying his absolute best to succeed in every area of life. This is a desire long past him, something he's thrown away for some unknown reason. Jurgen now is a solemn man of action, disregarding any morals for whatever he believes to be correct. If someone pays him to do dirty work, he will do it without hesitation. The new Jurgen Cobbald still appears to be a mystery, something having shifted him. He shows no regret for his former life, and does not reflect any of the man he had once striven to be so greatly. It is as if his entire life has been thrown into the state he is when he's in combat, relentlessly and unforgiving. However, he still is reserved and somber, and holds some degree of kindness; simply not nearly as much as he once had shown when he first arrived in Surna.
It still appears that he will never back down from a fight or a challenge, and he has yet to shake off his stubbornness. Alignment: Neutral: Good
Tongues: Common Occitan
Physical Information wrote:
Height: 5'11" (180 cm) Weight: 178lbs (80.7 kg) Description: Jurgen stands at around Five foot Eleven, with broad shoulders and a relatively muscular frame, but still lean in the aspect of excess fat. His skin is rather tanned from almost constant exposure to the sun. His shoulders are adorned with a ruined black cloak. He wears a blue breastplate and Surcoat, covering a plain tan Buffcoat. His face is relatively clean, with no scarring and little blemishes in complexion. On his waist rests a sword belt, holding a rather weathered Steel Broadsword. The hilt is simply brown with silver trim around it. On his knees rest what looks like pads, most likely to diffuse impact pressure from any landing. Build: Trimmed muscle frame with defined contour, and naturally large shoulders. Eye Color: Brown Hair Color: A dark Brown/Black
Skill:
Skills wrote:
Swordplay - 4/5
Swordplay wrote:
Jurgen focused on the use of his sword for almost thirty years of his life. He's quite proficient, if not nearing master level. He engineers his own styles of combat, never sticking to any set style that was established by traditional training methods. His styles emphasize on maximizing the inertia and momentum from his slashes; often including long, and swift arcs. To make such a style possible, Jurgen also focuses on building agility.
His defensive posture is where Jurgen really does indeed shine. His posture focuses on abusing mistakes that the enemy would make by attacking first, and failing to outwit or overpower Jurgen within the first strike. He holds out his broadsword directly in front of him, utilizing his body as a medium to pivot the sword around, blocking as many attacks as he can. Once he blocks or parries any attacks against him, he attempts to redirect their momentum next to him, or in an area that would be simple for him to slash at. This is a combat type he's perfected throughout his 30 years training with a sword, and is near mastery of it.
General Weaponry - 3/5
General Weaponry wrote:
Jurgen's general weaponry skill is mostly confined to other melee weapons, as he has no real idea as to how to fire a Bow or a Musket. However, when the weaponry reaches the subject of Axes, Pole-arms, and in particular Spears and Lances, Jurgen begins to show expertise. While he was spending his time as captain of the guards, Jurgen took an interest in Lances as a secondary weapon when he needed the extra reach. He treated it like a fine art, perfecting his craft.
He always kept a low, forward moving stance whenever using a lance or spear, always pressuring his enemy backwards in an attempt to exhaust them. He never really defended with the lance itself, but instead relied on his agility and flexibility to dodge most attacks. He would fight using leather and cloth armor as well, to increase his ability to dodge.
Strength & Toughness - 3/5
Strength & Toughness wrote:
30 years of daily physical training has made him quite the stocky man, if anything. He shows levels of endurance quite regular for a veteran knight. His threshold of pain is surprisingly high, allowing him the ability to sustain himself through combat after going through various injuries, though he isn't nearly as resilient towards magical attacks.
Jurgen's strength, similar to his endurance and pain threshold, is above average for a human, while still being below the behemoth knights that generally are seen as the iconic knights of the world. His Broadsword swings and Lance thrusts usually have a large amount of force packed behind them, and for what he cannot do with brute strength, he always modifies his stance on the battlefield to accommodate the addition of momentum to his attacks.
Agility & Dexterity - 4/5
Agility & Dexterity wrote:
Agility is another spot where Jurgen shines, taking pride in allowing himself to be agile. He rarely wears restricting heavy armor that most knights wear, at most donning a steel breastplate for protection of the vital organs in his chest, but even then that's barely anything in comparison to what most knights wear. Without any hindrances upon him, Jurgen is quite the agile person, which he's built through years of training and fighting with his leaner-than-most frames.
Jurgen always has capitalized on Agility throughout his lifetime, various forms of minor acrobatics involved in his combat styles (mainly minor leaps, and perhaps a few vaulting or rolling maneuvers). His combat styles have always been based off of using speed and momentum to maximize the damage he deals, so he's always been very agile and nimble.
Magical Aptitude - 0/5
Magical Aptitude wrote:
Jurgen has no aptitude for magic. None at all. He simply could never weave when he tried, and he didn't really try to do so
Magical Resistance - 0/5
Magical Resistance wrote:
He has little to no resistance to magic, either. Just as much as a human being. He relies on being able to avoid such situations, instead of tanking the magical spells.
Charisma & Presence - 1/5
Charisma & Presence wrote:
While Jurgen's term as Guard Captain was far too short lived to measure the extent of his charisma and influential presence, he has proven through his time in Surna that he hardly has the ability to hold any sort of command over anyone. Rallying people, and rallying with them proves a challenge with him.
Willpower & Spirit - 4/5
Willpower & Spirit wrote:
Jurgen is a very strong-willed and headstrong person, often refusing to give up, whether for pride or simply out of persistence of completing a challenge. He allows very little outside of magic persuasion to influence and distract him, and even then there have been instances where Jurgen has been able to suppress the effects of some illusion magic on him to an extent, though it's considered to mostly be a mistake in weaving on the caster's part.
Biography:
Biography wrote:
Jurgen Cobbald was born of Occitan decent, said to be from the Blacksteel sons. Of course, this was his great grandparents, and not him. The blood still ran in him, however. He was native to the Nation-state of Ansbach, but his family migrated to the Buchloe when he was three years old. He remembers little about his birth land, if anything at all. He remembers his mother spoon-feeding him sweet honey from flowers in that province, and spoon-feeding is a thing has been regarded as an act of love in his eyes. He grew up impoverished, however, and was required to fend for himself multiple times against bullies. Through that, he gained a natural aptitude for combat and survival. He grew up a street urchin, hoping for the day that someone would save him. That day would eventually come, but it wouldn't be someone else saving him.
What happened to save him was an ideal that was being cultivated as he watched the Knights of the city do their training. He admired them, and that admiration rubbed off as he soon found himself mimicking their daily trainings with small branches from the trees outside the city. He would spend day after day observing the technique that they practiced, and put it in to practice himself as soon as he believed that he had memorized each step, and every swivel of a muscle. He would spend nights without sleep practicing these swings and skills that made the knights so gloriously appealing to him. His body became toned and tan as he toiled over the hot sun day after day.
Young Jurgen was missing something, however. He did not partake in the daily disciplines that the Knights held, keeping them steady and stalwart. He was immature in those natures that truly made one a knight; and he was oblivious to the fact. He held almost no formal education, only knowing what he learned in the streets and what little his parents told him. Eventually he would find his own training and tutoring, but it would not be until the later years in the Occitan states. When he was eighteen, he enlisted in the local guard force. He swiftly rose through the ranks, showing excellent prowess for battle and policing of the town he lived in. Within a year, he rose to the Captain of the guard after a riot killed the former. His duty term was short lived when a slip of duty took everything away from him.
He spent an average of four months as guard Captain, and he was charged with preparing the town Watch for war against another one of the Occitan towns whom held a long standing grudge against his town. He began training the men to fight in a large scale battle, something most of the new recruits had not have done. Due to his inexperience, many believed his tenure to be premature. He was oblivious to the small stints of rebellion and defiance, or he just simply disregarded it; even he does not know which he did. He did, however, know about his Lieutenant and his ill-will towards Jurgen. His Lieutenant was a 35 year old man, who was set to be next in line for guard Captain. He was turned down, as the Captain’s untimely death during the riot was considered to be aided by someone in the guard. All eyes were turned to the Lieutenant, who at the time, had grown to be quite the jealous man.
To Jurgen’s knowledge, it was apparent that he would rebel eventually; when, was the question. Two months in to his term, he met a woman. She was a beautiful one, but an unfortunate one. She was a widow, her husband killed in a skirmish between the two towns. Jurgen felt bad for the woman, and was quite stricken by her. He fell in love with her after their first conversation, which lasted eight hours as they waited through the night together. Within a month, they were considering marriage, and Jurgen was a mesmerized as he could become.
He made one basic mistake, one common with young men everywhere: He became too in love with someone he had met out of nowhere, and nor did he know her husband. He never even had seen the woman before, and before he could realize his error, it was too late. The town had been attacked, but not by the enemies he expected, but by undead warriors. Skeletons and decaying knights alike laid siege to the town, and Jurgen was forced to face a decision. Save the women he allegedly loved, or save his kin. He chose wrong, and saved the woman.
Once outside of the town, the woman revealed who she was; a lesser Vampire whom was working for the undead Lich razing the town. He was either to be sired in to a vampire thrall for her, or killed. He chose the latter, fighting fiercely. Eventually, he came out on top due to a blunder on the Vampire’s side. With this fight over, Jurgen had vowed to himself that he would redeem himself one day.
After the town was razed on his fault, Jurgen went into self exile. He honed his skills along the way, but he never had received proper knighthood rites. He proclaimed himself to be a knight, but he never actually became one. It is still his dream to become one, and it has been years since he's settled down in a single town. He's simply a drifter, moving from town to town and doing virtuous deeds whenever the situation calls for it, as a way to redeem himself.
After arriving in Surna, the first destination that Jurgen stayed at for any extended period of time, Jurgen already was making enemies and very few allies. People didn't seem to like his presence in the town, but that didn't deter him much. He remained quiet in the town, not causing much of an uproar. However, he frequently would go out and try to hunt on his own, or merely hone his blade. Throughout the times, he's outlived most of the enemies he has made during his stay.
After a long hiatus of going virtually invisible on any level of Surnan society, Jurgen has resurfaced once more, still with no clear goal in mind. On his first day of resurfacing, Vorn Tyrr, a man he had met and seemed to harbor a dislike towards, was found leaping out of a window in the Imperial Trading post. Jurgen already had known that Vorn was a wanted man, and therefore began pursuit. After some time of combat and pursuit, Jurgen stumbles upon Vorn being killed by an Aasimir, and engages in combat with the man for a short time. He soon flees, leaving Jurgen to engage in combat with constructs summoned by some amulet foreign to Jurgen.
The battle rages on as he takes a few Radium-tipped bolts to his side, causing him to be impaired by the acute radiation syndrome that follows. After that battle was resolved, Jurgen decided that he needed to upgrade his arsenal, and seriously improve how he fights.
Miscellaneous
Miscellaneous wrote:
Favored Enemy: N/A Favored Weapon: Broadsword/Longsword Deity: Minor worship of Strauss
Current Task:
+Acquire a lasting, steady source of income +Find ways to better himself in combat +Acquire more magically resilient equipment
Inventory:
Inventory wrote:
1x Buffcoat 1x Pair of Leggings 1x Blue Surcoat 1x Blue Steel breastplate 1x Black hood/Cloak 500 Shillings 1x Steel Broadsword, dulled. 1x Satchel (contents include a few salves and a roll of bandages)
Last edited by Noris on Thu Oct 25, 2012 2:58 pm; edited 21 times in total (Reason for editing : Overhaul edit pt5)
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Subject: Re: Jurgen Cobbald - Knight of 1 Sun Feb 26, 2012 7:20 pm
Wrong section
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Subject: Re: Jurgen Cobbald - Knight of 1 Sun Feb 26, 2012 7:34 pm
Moved to Approval.
You seem to have a good grasp of the Occitanian lore. :3
Noris Scrub
Posts : 38 Join date : 2012-02-26 Age : 28
Subject: Re: Jurgen Cobbald - Knight of 1 Mon Feb 27, 2012 2:03 am
I could have sworn it was approved already :/
Also, just as a little footnote, I'll be adding on to his backstory periodically. Small things, and elaborations on things I had made general before.
Aand I'm going to edit this a bit to try and make it not so bad.
also I don't have to use the DnD system, right? I really don't like it :C
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Subject: Re: Jurgen Cobbald - Knight of 1 Mon Feb 27, 2012 2:54 am
This shit was approved, so why the hell is it here?
Noris Scrub
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Subject: Re: Jurgen Cobbald - Knight of 1 Mon Feb 27, 2012 3:04 am
That's what I was wondering-... ;~;
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Subject: Re: Jurgen Cobbald - Knight of 1 Mon Feb 27, 2012 3:10 am
Wow. It was actually, upon checking. Just consider him approved until we move him back. Minor brainfart there on Krug's behalf.
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Subject: Re: Jurgen Cobbald - Knight of 1 Mon Feb 27, 2012 7:11 am
My bad. GOD DAMNIT PSYCHE
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Subject: Re: Jurgen Cobbald - Knight of 1 Mon Feb 27, 2012 7:57 am
Krug wrote:
My bad. GOD DAMNIT PSYCHE
Noris Scrub
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Subject: Re: Jurgen Cobbald - Knight of 1 Mon Feb 27, 2012 8:13 am